I really don't think it's working. I like the red star - it looks like a star. But, the others seem to be too wonky and not star like enough to be recognizable as stars (the blue one looks more like a sailboat than a star!). It is supposed to be a wonky version of this pattern (anyone know the name of it?):
I'm not sure if I should keep trying to make more or just move on to something else since I do have other ideas I'd like to try out.